Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, you think anyone is more important than the others?
Some people believe that a country is considered as success when it gains economic prosperity. However I firmly agree that some other criteria such as education, happiness or medical care should be placed more emphasis in comprehensive growth in a nation. In this essay, I will give explanations for above elements and determine that is the most vital with several certain reasons.
The first point in favor of index happiness is extremely essential in deciding any nation whether achieve success or not. It is unusual in these days that citizens in affluent countries say that they actually do not have feelings of pleasant or happiness despite of earning much more money. Practically, citizens in these countries only are abundant in material but not psychology. The clear example for this phenomenon is that workers or scientists has suffered strains in working to the extent that they commit suicide or experience mental disorders. The second outstanding issue is that educational system in quality guarantee to successful path of a country in the long term. In fact, industrialized nation not only pay more attention for economic investment but strengthen in development of education. Admittedly, to ensure sustainable growth in the future, later generation need to be created optimal conditions in individual progress with aim to serve for economy as whole as society better.
In my point, problem involved in health care gains more importance any other factors. Initially, access to medical care is basic right human and a measure to ensure a standard of living. Citizens are not more likely to have productive efficiency if not possessing good health status. It is true that healthy workforce may make greatly contribution on general economy. The reason that should be mentioned is that to get index happiness, all citizens need be receive immediate health care services. It is affordable with low – income families and reach residents in remote areas. As a result, the country is attributable to success when getting high quality in health care for their residents.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there are variety of factors leading to success in a nation from education to happiness. In addition, element of medical care is the most crucial among them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1847826087 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83333101672 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58152173913 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1729289225 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.421052632 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163495283913 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450409514868 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537336090877 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950664165034 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487575497737 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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