In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In teaching and professional career, some adults labour harder than others. This essay will discuss, which elements lead to make some people work harder and it will then address the question of whether is a good thing to work hard.
The two most important things that lead to someone to work harder are money and success. Money represent the fundamental reason to work harder. The more money you get the better economy you have, which means economic concerns vanished away for ever. Likewise, success seems less important, but is related to self confident that get people more determined to achieve their professional goals. A clear example of hard working means extra money, is Christmas when children and family make their Santa’s List, that never, I do not why is a cheap list.
With regards to if always is a good thing to work harder, let analyse a couple of ideas related to. The first one is, harder work not always lead someone to improve it position at work. There are extra considerations like other candidates to the job, or what is your relation with the managers of the company. Next idea is related to health, physical and mental. How can affect a big exposure to larger journeys of work to our body. The best example of this question is the burnout syndrome which can lead to many people the desist to work harder.
In conclusion, there is no easy answer to both questions proposed. In my opinion, people have to be care about how hard they push at work. If work hard was a common reality there would not need of managers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...le work harder and it will then address the question of whether is a good thing to work hard. The ...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'represents'.
Suggestion: represents
...ork harder are money and success. Money represent the fundamental reason to work harder. ...
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Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'positions'?
Suggestion: positions
...k not always lead someone to improve it position at work. There are extra considerations...
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Line 9, column 522, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... syndrome which can lead to many people the desist to work harder. In conclusion, th...
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Line 13, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... care about how hard they push at work. If work hard was a common reality there wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73897058824 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38475731974 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6869781963 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497145926074 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150591257456 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114314373942 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298195560282 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104849992943 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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