The modern world had changed the family structure in many countries. Most of the families have now become a nuclear family including parents and one or two children. Nobody can deny the fact that the training and education that receiving from children’s home are the most important one in their life. Parents behavior is a great influence on children for moulding their attitude towards the outside world. Children born in good, loving and caring families are having much higher chances to become a good citizen of any country. So, it must be considered the most crucial part of children’s education.
Families are the most important parts of any society. Children at their young age are like computers without any programming. They turned out who they truly are by how their early stages of life develop. They are learning in their early ages, the basic knowledge of the world around them. Parents and the immediate family members are the ones going to teach them how to talk, behave, and respect in public. Children will get their moral education is primarily from their parents. Lack of role model parenthood has led to many people to fall in the path of criminal activities. For example, the previous German leader Adolf Hitler’s had a very disturbing childhood. This had a deep impact on his life, and he became the most dangerous man in the last century.
Also, children with parents who are leading a role model life tent to outsmart the others who do not. However, there are exceptional cases in the world that a person who had no parents with them at their young age turns out to be a world renewed entrepreneurs or influential individuals. Quality time spends together as a family will have a great impact on children. If children are seeing their parents are giving respect to each other, they likely to follow their culture and grow to show this towards others they met outside their home.
To conclude, Children should get their education in school for learning how the world works but none of this will matter if they turn out to be a bad individual. The society will not get any real benefit with such people. A role model parenthood can mold and train, children with morally strong people skills that are beneficial for the society. Therefore, it is most important that a child should have a role model parent that he or she can look up to while in their early age.
- Modern appliances in the home have become more common leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle Do you agree or disagree 87
- Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task What are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language What is the best way to overcome them Explain and include your personal experience or knowledge of these pro 84
- You have received a record that needs to be translated Write a letter to a translating agency and say What is there on the record Why do you want to translate it Why is it so urgent for you to get it translated 82
- While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples. 61
- Some people prefer cold weather conditions while others don t Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'entrepreneur'?
Suggestion: entrepreneur
...ung age turns out to be a world renewed entrepreneurs or influential individuals. Quality tim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80240963855 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51826712799 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50843373494 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0241072797 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.652173913 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73913043478 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16062383624 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047752830752 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507810055438 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106836603895 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195287311344 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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