Human beings are living every part of the planet. You will find them everywhere from hottest Sahara Desert to coldest artic regions. Due to the planet earth’s tilted axis and its continuous circling around the sun, the earth has different seasons throughout the year. There are some people like cold weather and many others who enjoy the warm climate. There could be many reasons for anyone to choose their preferred weather conditions.
Firstly, the people who choose to live in cold weather conditions are mainly born in such area and preferred to stay there. Even though there are very few outing options out there, people try and enjoy their cold conditions like snow skiing and ice fishing. There are certain type of fruits and vegetables which requires the cold condition to grow, e.g. Strawberries tend to be more juicy and tasty in mountain areas where the temperature is low. The air pollution is also minimal in cold weather because of the absence of dust particles in the air.
On the other hand, the warmer climate is preferred by many. Most of the warmer areas of the planet are more populated than cold areas. People do not need to cover their whole body to save the heat off their body which is a real disadvantage while in colder places. There are more activities outside their home for people who are in hot conditions. They could enjoy morning sunshine and an evening walk most of the days in a year.
In conclusion, most people who like warmer climate are more outgoing type and prefer to continue staying in such areas. However, there are people who like cold and less populated areas to live in. It is recommended that people should stay in a warmer climate to thrive more in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the hottest'.
Suggestion: from the hottest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the coldest'.
Suggestion: to the coldest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ry few outing options out there, people try and enjoy their cold conditions like snow s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vening walk most of the days in a year. In conclusion, most people who like warm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., first, firstly, however, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77591973244 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29581549419 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6555933232 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199744704632 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683329485496 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611877678426 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123577062827 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355798059381 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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