Education from preschool through university should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is argued that education system should be free starting child first level until reaching university, as all government expense. In my perspective, I strongly agree in this opinion, I will explain in this essay why education is privilege for the student.
First of all, as the saying goes, “Education is the only thing that no one can get it from you”. It will possible by means of providing accessible and good quality of education to the public. However, some families don’t have enough income to send all their children to institution; it will be a burden especially to parents who don’t have high salary and stable job. As a result, student despite eager to learn will not able to reach and complete college level, they need work to help their families and forget their ambition in life. In comparison, if public schools are free of charge, students can focus in their study and parents will not worry the tuition fee and school expenses. On clear example, family with three children and they are attending school with different level. If the provider of the family have less income, it will not be possible to pay the school fee. That’s why free education for everyone is highly essential.
Secondly, students will have a better future by attaining their goals through continues education. Everyone is going to school, to learn good values, to be knowledgeable and be a better a person. After attaining their chosen profession, it will be a good start to the path they want to follow.
On the contrary, if government sector don’t have the capability to make education free, they can build a program like the other countries or private sector implementing like study now-pay later program. After the student finished and graduated in university and got a permanent job and enough salary, she/ he can pay the school expenses.
In conclusion, free education for everyone is extremely helpful for the parents and students. Lack of financial should not be the hindrance to a better future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be the hindrance to a better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98224852071 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64221558084 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2928977849 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219370658805 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764682896211 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501148624614 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138982609814 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542879411117 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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