Effect media coverage of celebrities for children
Nowadays, it is true many people believe that media coverage of celebrities was have a negative effect on children. I totally agree with this essay, like we can see on media that coverage of celebrities so many bad things shown over there.
It is because the interest of our society where something bad from always be a hot topic to talk. For example, gossip about celebrities where Aprillia is getting divorced by her husband. And that topic will be top topic discussion everywhere and every time. Untill a pair of husband and wife also joined divorced just because the husband said Aprillia make a mistake and the wife said the husband of Aprillia is the problem. So look what is wrong? This is something that very bad.
As result for children because they always seeing something like that, their mind will shaped part something like that is good topic for discussion and they will always thinking about celebrities gossip and forget about they are prospect of future of country.
It is important to parents, i hope all of parents understand and always lead the children on what they watch and keep give the children knowledge about their position as determining of future of country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... that media coverage of celebrities was have a negative effect on children. I totall...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'shape'
Suggestion: shape
...ng something like that, their mind will shaped part something like that is good topic ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...pic for discussion and they will always thinking about celebrities gossip and forget abo...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... country. It is important to parents, i hope all of parents understand and alwa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86764705882 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44502708358 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4971630635 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273237885841 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956665519052 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125414813872 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162024630141 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126883869227 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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