The graph of the popullation change between 1940 and 2000 in three countries in the U.S. state of oregon

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The graph of the popullation change between 1940 and 2000 in three countries in the U.S. state of oregon

The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in Columbia, Yamhill and Washington. Overall, it can be described that Washington is the bigger growth than two other countries.

In 1940, Washington had people as many as 75.000 souls, while Yamhill and Columbia not much different that is 30.000 souls for Yamhill and around 25.000 souls for Columbia. But, after 30 years later the third that countries had some change where Washington increased almost 60% from 75.000 souls to 125.000 souls, while the Yamhill climb from 30.000 souls to 45.000 souls, and Columbia rise around 7.000 souls.

From 1970 to 2000, Washington experience terrace bigger that is from 125.000 souls to 245.000 souls, meanwhile Yamhill grow up from 45.000 souls to circa 90.000 souls, and followed by Columbia with ascent surroundings doubled from 1970.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24264705882 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31624649754 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7458365153 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964395873724 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984362545792 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153283837316 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103323684127 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103752362701 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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