Emplyement
there is an emerging debate that working in a different organization is better than being at the same company for years. Although staying in the same place can uplift you through the career ladder faster, I believe working in different organizations broadens our network.
Working with the same employer for years could escalate your career faster which also leads to an increase in salary. This is because the company has seen those people stay when the workloads get tough which represents their loyalty to the company so that the company trusts them more. According to an ILO survey in 2019 found that 70% of people who have been working 40 years in the finance sector has a higher salary rate than those who worked in different organization. Most of the reason is that they have been trusted by their bosses to handle projects.
On the other hand, working at different companies lead to a broader network of people has. This led to various partnerships one acquire to be an entrepreneur as one has been trained to get along with people from different backgrounds. A survey of PwC in 2002 found that nearly 50% of entrepreneurs in Silicon Valley hire their core team from old acquaintances where they used to go to work. This is because they feel more comfortable talking and working with them.
To conclude, even though working at one company for years may increase salaries faster, being an employee in different companies widen one's network if one wants to be an entrepreneur. Both choices have their own favorable impacts to workers.
- Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18 Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers 61
- The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1989 to 2007 73
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways governments and individuals can tackle these problems 67
- Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent hospital 67
- The bar chart shows the average number of hours per week that men and women spend doing activities around the home 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there is an emerging debate that working in a...
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Line 8, column 136, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...n employee in different companies widen ones network if one wants to be an entrepren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90874524715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59417038015 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7169696353 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.583333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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