The environment problem facing today’s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Governments and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems have become the most concerning matter nowadays. Some people think that the task to protect the environment from getting more polluted should belong to governments and large organizations because such problems is out of regular individuals’ reach. In my opinion, there are still many ways for ordinary people to get involved in.
To begin with, it is true that this big job is mostly the responsibility of governments and companies. Usually, the environmental problem requires the global effect which only authorities and international organizations have the ability to organize. For example, many global events held by the U.N to encourage growing more trees in large scale have achieved great successes in clearing the air pollution in many countries. Furthermore, people have already paid a substantial amount of tax to governments’ funds. Therefore, it is the duty of nations’ leaders to bring a better environment to the residents in return.
However, even when the pollution problems is so great, it does not mean that regular citizens cannot take actions in any measures to address this matter. Firstly, increasing each and every person’s concept of preserving the environment by doing small things in a daily basis could result in a much clearer atmosphere. These small actions could be as simple as putting the rubbish in the trashcans or sending used items to recycling companies. Secondly, along with raising adults’ awareness, teaching children good behavior and attitude towards saving the community’s environment is also an effective way in the long term. In sum, even a simplest action from a person could bring a much cleaner environment.
In conclusion, while the environmental problem facing today’s world is a huge matter, I believe it is the responsibility of both ordinary residents and governments and large companies to improve the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50841750842 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27419567729 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3344650672 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331092924186 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966708702802 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869330870361 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214725803855 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102926398834 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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