Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes
of environmental damage? Who are responsible for preventing environmental damage?
It is undeniable that in this modern era, environmental issues are of the responsibility of many nations. The roots of this phenomenon could be the remarkable development of human society, and both individuals and governments should take steps to mitigate those problems.
The begin with, environmental problems are primarily caused by the inventions of human. Those include different types of factories, vehicles that run by petroleum, and plastic. The enormous amount of carbon dioxide emissions resulting from those factors and the production of them combined can cause the greenhouse effect, which then directly have negative repercussions on people lives. Plastic bags is a pertinent example of those inventions that kill sea lives and destroy the balance of nature.
Human, therefore, are responsible for protecting the environment and bring it back to its original state. While scientists could create inventions that could ameliorate the situation, other individuals could protect the environment by reusing or recycling plastic products. Those people could also choose to travel by public transportations instead of private vehicles to mitigate the amount of released emissions. Additionally, national and local authorities could allocate resources to provide more public vehicles, as well as enforce policies that raise tax on petroleum transportation.
In conclusion, while rapid development of technology and urban areas are the major causes of environment pollution, individuals and government bodies could take measures to solve this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...take steps to mitigate those problems. The begin with, environmental problems are primar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81222707424 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11612367068 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3113555717 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920505906286 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439821459427 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06785327993 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566321535893 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252256807857 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.