Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes of
environmental damage? Who are responsible for preventing environmental damage?
It is acknowledged that ecosystem destruction is a serious concern in the majority of nations. This essay attempts to shed light on the driving factors of this tendency before elucidating several viable solutions that should be adopted by both the government bodies and individuals in order to tackle this worrying issue.
There are a host of compelling reasons as to why environmental demolition is a primary problem in societies. One key rationale is that the huge amount of energy consumption is to blame for the environmental problems. This argument could be reinforced by the fact that the widely use of fuel-powered vehicles, especially automobiles have given rise to the air polluted in big cities in at alarming levels. In addition, the utilization of the cheap consumer goods could bring an adverse bearing upon the natural ecosystem. This tendency stem from the cheaply and readily of the goods which stimulate people throwing trash irresponsibly, and this act as a precursor to the overloading landfills and polluting water sources in our living environment.
To combat this serious situation, several feasible steps should be taken by national authorities and residences in terms of preventing the environment from the deterioration. First and foremost, people should alter to a sustainable lifestyle in their daily life for preserving planet. For instance, inhabitants could mitigate using nylon bag by replacing it with bags made from environmentally friendly materials, and this could bestow an enormous benefit to the ecosystem. Furthermore, governments should stimulate citizens to use public transportation or other friendly means including bikes or electric cars for commuting by alleviate the transport ticket prices or construct free parking places for electric vehicles. As a results, these measures not only reduce the carbon emissions in the areas but also mitigate the reliance of human on carbon-intensive sources.
In conclusion, there are some serious repercussions attributable to this negative tendency, and it is crucial that the aforementioned measures be implemented to deal with this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: hosts
...ackle this worrying issue. There are a host of compelling reasons as to why environ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ater sources in our living environment. To combat this serious situation, severa...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...arking places for electric vehicles. As a results, these measures not only reduce the car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53374233129 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19771409565 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616564417178 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3390868872 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.769230769 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105935416105 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422445578891 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490649392715 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533255734445 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486666637764 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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