Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes of environmental damage? Who are responsible for preventing environmental damage?
In the fast-pace modern of life these days, the vast majority of countries in the world have to face environmental deterioration which can be attributed by several reasons. To address this problem, it could be a combination of effort of either government and individuals.
On the one hand, numerous activities of human in the world cause the damage of environment. To commence with, one of the most major reasons is industrial development that has detrimental effects on either water or forest. Human directly discharge waterwatse into the sea and rivers, resulting in the extreme water pollution. In addition, the forest has been destroyed recklessly for a lot of purpose of human, including entertainment and timber extraction. Dissapearing of forests causes climate changes, floods and drought for example. Furthurmore, Greenhouse effects is also the main reason for environmental deterioration. Too much carbon emissions are released into the air from burning fossil fuels, including from vehicles, causing air pollution and damaging the atmosphere.
On the other hand, government plays an essential role in preventing environmental destoy; however, it is not the solely responsibility of government.Initially, the governemt has responsibility of implementing regulations related to environmental protection, and banning strictly organizations or individuals breaking the rules intentionally. In addition, citizen should be aware of the dangers when the surroundings are deteriorated, consequently, following the regualtions and taking actions to protect environment even from the simplest ones, literring in the desginate locations for example. Moreover, government should encourage citizens use public transportations or use vehicle with renewable energy. When individuals support these encouragements of government, effects of Greenhouse on environments can be mitigated effectively.
In conclusion, the problem related to environmental damage, happening in almost all countries, results mainly from the industrial activities. However, I believe that with the effort of both government and each of individual, our surrounding can be prevented from deteriorating.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Initially
...the solely responsibility of government.Initially, the governemt has responsibility of im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00967741935 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57904788553 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9486038357 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274523401907 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791334126805 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807838284198 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138552580397 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532086592437 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.