The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo.
The given pictures describe steps of building an igloo.
In general, there are 13 stages to complete an igloo with the first stage of finding hard-packed snow and the final step is cutting ventilation in the walls or roof.
To commence with, it is important to find the hard-packed snow. Then, a snow saw is used to slice this snow into several large blocks which are located at the base of an igloo. Next these snow blocks are smoothed all the edges by a snow saw, and placed to form a circle . An entrance is created by digging a hole under the wall before putting a block into the last opening on the top of the igloo.
In the next step, snow is thrown onto the igloo and packed into all crevices. Then, the inside of the igloo is smoothed by hand. After that, the entrance is built and the hole is covered with snow blocks. Finally, to complete the igloo, ventilation holes must be cut in the walls or roof to light up inside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...e last opening on the top of the igloo. In the next step, snow is thrown onto th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34285714286 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19362336582 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7859438228 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177434352066 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865191808082 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852948584288 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151224005876 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882804459452 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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