Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
One school of thought holds an idea that printed newspapers are unnecessary nowadays. While this perception is somewhat justifiable, I would contend that traditional newspapers are somewhat of paramount importance for our daily lives.
On the one hand, it is understandable that printed magazines are becoming uncommon in societies. First and foremost, the advancement of technology helps people could read newspaper on internet from their electronic devices with free of charge. Therefore, individuals are no longer need to buy physical newspaper and still could update the news in worldwide. In addition, the existence of online newspaper could bestow an enormous benefit upon the natural ecosystem. This argument could be reinforced by the fact that the absence of tradition newspaper could mitigate the number of trees which have been cutting down annually for manufactured printed newspapers. As a consequence, it makes humans more prone to prevent the natural environment from global warming.
On the other hands, there are a host of compelling reason as to why I am convinced that individuals should stick with the traditional newspapers. One rationale is that some small communities may struggle in adapting with the new type of newspaper. For instance, elderly people who are born in the previous generations are not familiar with reading on smartphones or computers. Subsequently, it could generate some barriers for this group of people when they are trying to collect information from online articles. Another justification is that is that the widespread of online magazines could give rise to the unstable incomes of some traditional newspaper editorial companies. The fact that online newspapers change the way people read have brought an adverse bearing upon the revenue sources came from printed articles, and this could act as a precursor to the deterioration of a thriving economy.
In conclusion, while it is irrefutable that printed newspapers should be replaced by the online reading platform, I would contend that the upsides that it brings towards our societies are significantly more noteworthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50304878049 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0239461097 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9394272202 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175818617697 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605081986689 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249406328199 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103175784376 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370915615479 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.