Environmental pollution is a serious issue and it is important to take steps on an individual level to reduce it. But now, since it is becoming an international issue, it is time to take environmental protection to a higher level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that when surrounding contamination is a vital problem of everyone in the planet. I completely agree with this view that environment issues become more and more serious currently and thus each person need to have more responsibility to alleviate environmental issues and enhance to look after it.
The industry revolution have led to the number of international pollution. The first issues we need mention is global warming that is caused by exhaust emissions from factories and traffic such as carbon dioxie, methane, nitrogen which result in greenhouse effect. The other point is depletion of natural resources when industries use it too much. this may lead to make some important resources would disappear fovever.
There are several ways to improve the quality of environment. Firstly, national authorities need to develop alternative energy further to really make a difference in mankind’s fight against global contamination in order to reduce the dependence on fossil fuel. Secondly, companies have to equip the waste treatment systems to tackle with toxic substances. In addition, every individual has the sense of environment protection, we can make a great contribution through daily activities. For example, the most basic methods is recycling or using as less as possible plastic bags or turning lights off when we are not in room to save a lot of energy. The main point is the important link between government and citizens, all effort would be fail if we do not cooperate with policy.
In conclusion, for all the things that I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that environmental problem is the top priority not only an individual but also society. Therefore, it is time to enhance to improve surrounding and protect quality our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ogen which result in greenhouse effect. The other point is depletion of natural res...
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Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ources when industries use it too much. this may lead to make some important resourc...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...c methods is recycling or using as less as possible plastic bags or turning lights...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25614035088 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98074254177 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7545614719 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130617891093 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373510478226 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376473666293 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785060370318 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360651373966 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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