the environmental problem that todays world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation, so government and large organisaotns should be responsiblie for reducing the amount of damgae being done to the environemnt. agree or disagree
Progress is impossible without change and those who do not change their minds cannot change anything. Nowadays, environmental issues like global warming have been wreaking havoc and are more crucially impacted than at any time in the past. Some opine that authorities, large firms and manufacturers can play a fundamental role in reversing the damages done to the environment while ordinary people have little to contribute. This essay completely agrees that the onus should be on the Govt to disrepair this adverse effect.
To begin with, the effortless contribution of the common man has an insignificant impact on environmental degradation, and so the government ought to undertake responsibilities to reduce this detrimental effect. While people have reduced the usage of plastics by introducing biodegradable products, the Government has taken measures for forest preservation. To cite an example a recent study suggested that around 8% of deforestation has been reduced on account of the latest regulations imposed by local bodies.
In stark contrast, individuals fail miserably to completely eradicate this complication on account of their limitations, adding to this government's rules and regulations are not very considerate to produce tangible results in the ecosystem. For example if factories stop releasing toxic waste into the environment which is untreated, emitting co2, the environment would be less harmful. According to the world's nature conservation survey industrial wastes are the key reason for the contemporary ecological collapse, and comprises 70% of overall pollution.
In short, this essay completely agreed that the government should take stringent measures to preserve the environment and avoid tragic consequences to Mother Nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...account of their limitations, adding to this governments rules and regulations are n...
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Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...would be less harmful. According to the worlds nature conservation survey industrial w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74524714829 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20767451386 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650190114068 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4654734985 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.363636364 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220950599837 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069746092732 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463879329855 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112139037295 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303072283435 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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