The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Human kind is facing plenty of serious environmental problems that lead to the feeling of helplessness in many people. They think that there is nothing they can do to improve the situations but the government and large companies must take the responsibilities. I believe there are many things individuals can do and therefore, I completely disagree with their opinion.
It is true that the government policies and large corporation’s activities have huge impacts on the environment. The government should implement eco-friendly policies and regulations to cut down the contamination and pollution. Similarly, corporations should have a proper waste treatment system to reduce chemical hazards in the air, water and land. They should invest in alternative energy sources and organic products. These actions can reduce the damage and help to achieve sustainable development.
On the other hand, individuals can reduce the negative effects on the environment. People can change their consuming behaviours, advocate movements to protect the environment, reduce less household waste and use public transport instead of personal vehicles. People should always be aware of the consequences of their actions before making any decisions. Customers are encouraged to replace plastic material with biodegradable packing. This will eliminate the vast amount of fossil waste that is going into the food sources of animal pieces every day.
To conclude, it is the whole society’s responsibility to improve the situations and protect the environment. Government can impose eco-friendly policies, large businesses can treat industrial waste properly and people can change the way they consume goods to reduce waste.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...way they consume goods to reduce waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, similarly, so, therefore, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70196078431 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.142578816 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9730909639 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291404993814 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861217478076 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434441357798 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167141547688 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222854761524 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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