Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals ass individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is often argued that protect the environment is only the mission of politicians not residents. I strongly disagree with this opinion.
On the one hand, government plays an essential role to prevent the threat of environmental problems such as introduce laws, impose taxes, ect. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Although, individuals can do too little, more people will make a big effect on the planet. As it cannot be denied that each citizens were partly contributed to make environmental problems, for example, the emission from factories, daily basic trash, smoke from transport, ect. Therefore, they are responsiable for acting to help community. Research has found that environmental status like global warming, degradation, declicing significantly of endangered animals, which accounts for 80% from human beings.
On the other hand, politicants cannot manage the large whole of area. They might find it difficult to opt for polluted issue in small places. Futhermore, the more people take their awareness on protecting environment, the more efficient measures will make. Moreover, if everyone takes their protection, it will build community-awareness, which makes the earth more better. Singapore, for instance, has been succeeded in becoming one of the greatest countries due to the aware of individuals.
In conclusion, politiciants must play their part as significantly as individuals in environmental protection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...munity-awareness, which makes the earth more better. Singapore, for instance, has been succ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61818181818 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26680018842 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9310021716 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2857142857 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141325142372 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443179537002 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621572072244 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08964291119 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370510647445 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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