: Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, environmental problems such as deforestation, global warming and climate change are becoming increasingly common and attract more and more public attention. However, there are some irresponsible people who argue that responsibility to protecting the environment should fall on politicians not individuals due to the fact that individuals can do too little. I absolutely disagree with these people.
It is undeniable that politicians play an important role in tackling environmental problems. First, in order to do this, for example, to slow down global warming, it is critical to reduce the number of traffic on the road and people’s reliance on fuel. Adopting policies which enable the development of renewable energy resources and the improvement of public transport services could be an applicable solution. It is politicians who suggest and enforce these policies. In addition, by using their influence, they could, for instance, encourage people to consume environmentally friendly products instead of those with a lot of packaging or give speeches at schools and other educational institutes to teach younger generations the importance of environmental preservation and how to coexist with other animals and plants.
However, it is flawed to use the reasons mentioned above to underestimate the effect of ordinary people on protecting the environment because they are able to greatly contribute to this process. By refusing to buy commodities manufactured by bad environmental practices or exerting pressure on governments to ban these practices, the public can put companies which maximizing their revenue by exploiting the environment out of business. They can also support for enterprises whose products are biodegradable. Without public involvement, it is extremely hard for these businesses to out-compete the bad ones.
In conclusion, although the politicians’ role in protecting the environment is undoubtful, normal people can greatly affect environmental safeguard by carefully choosing which products to buy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79069767442 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36399367728 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4840669571 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.076923077 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210944097755 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691250892466 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090641573804 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136592102908 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929229318827 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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