Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that if there was a special language the life was very easy and people could communicate with each other easier, but there are many different types of languages that because different problems every year die out several of them. I strongly agree with it.
Different languages make people cannot connect with each other and make them far from each other. Some languages have difficult grammar not only is it very hard to learn and speak but also there is not any specialist teacher to learn it to others. Because this most of languages exit from live languages and forget after some years. Mandarian chines is one of these which 1.5 million people spoke with it but now nobody does not know this language.
Less languages make people learn them to contact with each other easily. If there is a special world language to learn people can learn it and live together. People become happy if they can have relationship. Imagine people who live far from each other can have relation and get familiar.
The people who live far from each other especially in other continents have different cultures and traditional. It is very brilliant if people can get familiar other cultures because every country has especial traditional and culture related to itself. Constructions, structures, natural environment in every region, country and continent is vary that if people can speak with each other this make them to see and know them.
Totally, if there are fewer languages make life easier. People have relation and contact easier and make them to be happy because they love to speak with different people and get familiar with different cultures.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e with each other easier, but there are many different types of languages that because differe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the languages') or simply say ''most languages''.
Suggestion: most of the languages; most languages
...her to learn it to others. Because this most of languages exit from live languages and forget aft...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun languages is countable.
Suggestion: Fewer
...w nobody does not know this language. Less languages make people learn them to con...
^^^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...re is a special world language to learn people can learn it and live together. People ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
... every region, country and continent is vary that if people can speak with each othe...
^^^^
Line 4, column 415, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...th each other this make them to see and know them. Totally, if there are fewer lan...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94244604317 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39421390752 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456834532374 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3327499968 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281968958033 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116420426295 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749095601551 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190080173683 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727693400703 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e with each other easier, but there are many different types of languages that because differe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the languages') or simply say ''most languages''.
Suggestion: most of the languages; most languages
...her to learn it to others. Because this most of languages exit from live languages and forget aft...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun languages is countable.
Suggestion: Fewer
...w nobody does not know this language. Less languages make people learn them to con...
^^^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...re is a special world language to learn people can learn it and live together. People ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
... every region, country and continent is vary that if people can speak with each othe...
^^^^
Line 4, column 415, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...th each other this make them to see and know them. Totally, if there are fewer lan...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94244604317 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39421390752 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456834532374 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3327499968 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281968958033 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116420426295 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749095601551 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190080173683 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727693400703 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.