Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, there are many languages have been disappeared and the number of it is continuing without any data, documentary about the language. Because of globalization so there are some people think this make life will be easier if mankind just need to communicate with a few common languages. However, I do not agree with this opinion.
First of all, the links between languages and cultures are too strong. As humanity loses a language as a part of culture in the world would no longer exist which means that we also lose the potential for greater diversity in arts, literature, and oral traditional. it is sources about knowledge which from many experiences of people of a long time spread out in generations. The China culture, for instant, imagine that if Chinese has disappeared, so the world would lose a huge asset about art, literature and especially martial art.
In addition, the traditional of each country or each tribe has affected from their mother tongue as the languages are oral medium. Thus, so many experiences, stories, legends or histories about the life before with local culture be conveyed from elder people to the new generations by talks in daily life. The legend about Hung King in vietnam, for example, during thousand years the children in vietnam was be told by their grandparents or their parents before it recorded on books, video… These are not forced to be told by other languages even though it can be translated to other languages but the beautiful in the legend will not be able to transmit as in Vietnamese.
In conclusion, the community between people around the world today needs a few languages. but the values of old languages will connect us from the past to future and it is extreme essential for humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70542232211 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0858798326 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285851862007 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102385885806 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873948385807 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169972549303 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102748872208 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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