Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, the number of endangered languages worldwide has increased dramatically. Some claim that these losses will lead to convenience in communication while the opponents , especially the linguists, predict that the extinct of languages will cause an irretrievable loss. As far as I am concerned, I argued that the preservation of languages is of tremendous importance to our human civilizations.
To begin with, the death of a particular language would definitely entail losses of valuable cultural heritage of certain areas. In fact, languages are more than collections or combinations of lexical words. The are vividly living carriers that convey the connection and associations of beliefs, doctrines and customs passing on from generation to generation of cultures. And the extinct of languages is a major factor leading to degradation of cultures and disappearance of traditional values.
What’s more, if we look at this question in another perspective, language distinction is giving us a shelter from the side-effect of the process of globalization. Most people who support the language extinction argued that language distinction is the barrier of communication keeping people coupling with each other. But there are always some vulnerable groups losing their jobs facing the competition of the enormous global market. So, languages give us a protection for the people who are not qualified to face these challenges. For example, it’s not very easy for a person who is not able to communicate in Chinese to find a job in China, which means there is less competition for Chinese people to get a job.
In conclusion, it is of great essence that the extinction of certain languages causes enormous loss and threat to human society and culture. Maybe we are powerless to stop the trend of globalization but for the greater sake of our interests and culture, we should keep the diversity of languages.
- In some large cities, people have to pay a fee when they drive their cars into the city centre in a policy to reduce the number of cars in the city. Give reasons in support and opposing this policy, and give your own opinion. 84
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37623762376 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18495634752 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1769853341 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187294051251 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646625838615 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428506082547 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10306831976 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047236550721 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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