Every year several languages die out.Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier ifthere are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree withthis opinion?
It is a well-known fact that languages represent the country's culture, however, there are those who say that English is a universal language, therefore, it does not matter if some languages disappear over time. I strongly agree with the statement of fewer languages will make our life simpler.
The reasons why I believe we need only a few languages because, these days, it is mandatory to learn other languages called “second language”. Students must learn it even though they will never visit the country in their entire lifetime, and they would never use it once they graduated. There are great types of languages, and yet, when you go to school or starting careers, they required an English ability, which makes learning other than English is such a waste of time.
Instead of learning random languages at school, we should focus on a few international languages that could actually help people out for their career or even traveling overseas, such as English and Spanish, which these two languages will guide you to all over the world. It is true that some languages are sometimes gone away, and it is a tragedy for those countries, however, people should embrace the changes for the new world and stop wasting valuable time for learning various languages.
To sum up, with the arguments above, it is a better way to understand the new trend and learning international languages rather than stressing out with all other languages. This will make student's life much easier and it will provide us more opportunities in life, anywhere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69147744525 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6916111776 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21892570667 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100009072161 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637590543209 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14106206667 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358766910587 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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