Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

university and college are higher than just a school. In university, we have to choose which major do we want to take. that's major of course affects our future. if we want to be a psychologist, then we have to take the psychology major, if we want to be a business men or women, take the business major. and many more. The subject that we learn also harder than before. we can't just chill and careless, we have to study hard. if we are not able to do that simple thing, then how about our future. we are the one who control our future.

I'm disagree with statement that said everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability. if they don't have an eligible level of academic ability, how can they survive in university or college. It's way harder than everybody thinks.

have you ever heard people that never graduate from their university or college? I'm pretty sure you've heard it at least once in your lifetime. Yes, that's the most simple example, they don't have enough ability so they can't survive there. The ability that i meant here is not just academic, it's also about or culture and life. we can't survive if we still childish and can't make our mind opened. To avoid that situations happened, we have to make harder admission for those who want to get to college or university. so they more sure about their decision and won't waste both their time and money. one more, university's fees is expensive, just selected people only can pay that. so don't waste yours.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ats major of course affects our future. if we want to be a psychologist, then we h...
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... men or women, take the business major. and many more. The subject that we learn al...
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... that we learn also harder than before. we cant just chill and careless, we have t...
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...at we learn also harder than before. we cant just chill and careless, we have to stu...
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...ess of their level of academic ability. if they dont have an eligible level of aca...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., they dont have enough ability so they cant survive there. The ability that i meant...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
... its also about or culture and life. we cant survive if we still childish and cant m...
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...e cant survive if we still childish and cant make our mind opened. To avoid that sit...
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...d wont waste both their time and money. one more, universitys fees is expensive, ju...
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...just selected people only can pay that. so dont waste yours.
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Suggestion: don't
...t selected people only can pay that. so dont waste yours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, then, at least, i mean, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59272727273 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34298672144 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.573245316 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.1428571429 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0952380952 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21080782319 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621473953797 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11586643956 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185964192534 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15022803055 0.056905535591 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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