Many sports players advertised in sports products.Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, sport players become more and more popular. Many people really into sport players. But lately, most of them always promoting sport products which gives people pros and cons. In this essay, I will analyze the advantages and disadvantages, also which one is more outweigh.
Promoting sport products usually gives advantages for both sides, the players and the company. The players get paid for promoting the products, and that's not a little money. That's involves a huge amount of money for their payment. On the other side, the company get advantages because their products got promoted by the sport players. More and more people know about their products. Not a little group of person interested on their products, instead there will be a bunch groups of people who interested to buy their products. That's make the company get a bigger income than before their promoting the products.
However sport players shouldn't promoting products too often because it will make people felt rid of it, especially if they just promoting the same products again and again. On the first promote, many people will notice the products and decided to buy and try it. But for the next time, they will get rid of it because they just see the same products all over their explore page. That situation bring disadvantages for both sides also. Followers from the players going to get bored to look at the products all the time. The followers want to look at the person because they are into the player, not into the products that they promoted. The company will get lower-income for the next promote because many people already bought the product on the first promote, so it's just a few of people who want to buy the products, while the company still pay the same amount of money to the players.
In conclusion, it can't be said either advantages outweigh the disadvantages or disadvantages outweigh the advantages. They have the same amount of weight , as i already wrote them in this second and third essay paragraph. Don't do it over because it will make people get bored. But you can still promote them for just a few time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, still, third, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84573002755 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41876063947 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440771349862 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8957213153 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9545454545 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253131185299 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872438318834 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076960031317 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174573733745 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560786398268 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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