Everyday, millions of tons food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening ? An how can we solve this problem.
Many people from global everyday abandon millions of tons food despite the lack of food of many other people in the world. From my perspective, this behavior have been established for many years and it take a lot of time to deal with it and also the way to tackle this issue will be discussed below.
There are a plethora of reasons that people get rid of their redundant food and it was set up many years ago. First, they think that food is unexpensive and they can purchase it any time with a large number of serves. Some people just buy food as they want, they just pay for a large amount of edibles and just eat a little for tasting and after that abandoning it right after. And the second is they consider that the some food just change its color a little in outside is not edible so they eliminate it. In fact, most households in many nations remove eats because of its appearance they believe that new fares in market are better. For instance, a banana has a small black dot in it will be remove immediately in America.
Wasting meals has been a global issue for many years and if we do not stop it, we will not have anything to maintain our life anymore. Currently, in some slums, food eliminated are found most in many rubbish bag with which is can be harmful for people who live in slums. To deal with this, government and food supplier have to strictly punish eats removing cases. For example, restaurant should give some advice for customers especially in when leaving too much serve, they must be fined commensurate with the food left. Besides, some kind of food which is easily to be stale need storing in fridge and it can trade with cheaper price for poorers.
In conclusion, wasting food is a negative behavior of a number of inhabitants in the world. While food can be easily throw away instead of storing more carefully and sell with a more affordable price for people who have difficulty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4899713467 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31769559604 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521489971347 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7364777875 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.466666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153617014695 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599721921428 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462365792162 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108506909073 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042421096714 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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