Everyday, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?
Food apparently plays a pivotal role in the growth of human beings. Nevertheless, there are plenty of food squandered on a regular basic. In this essay, I would analyze several reasons relating to this tendency, and suggest some workable remedies to deal with.
The foremost rationale is that there is a great deal of restaurants which buy an immense amount of food ranging from many types of meat to vegetables. This is due to the fact that these restaurant might be serving buffets as their major source of income and this required much food to serve for their guesses. As a result, millions tons of food could be thrown into trash cabins if it is not consumed sufficiently by customers or could not reach the high quality standards for next days.
However, many plausible measures could be implemented to mitigate the phenomenon. Firstly, the authorities ought to impose more stringent punishments and regulations which are relevant to the limited amount of food supplying for restaurants. Once one of buffet restaurants is fined strictly, the governments could deter others from squandering much food on their business. Moreover, not only restaurants but also patrons should be applied environmental taxes if they do not consume adequately food bought at buffet restaurants. These could lead to the significant decreasing in leftover food.
To conclude, food-serving establishments could be the main culprit of million tons of food wasted daily. However, many regulations could be introduced to cope with the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this restaurant' or 'these restaurants'?
Suggestion: this restaurant; these restaurants
...egetables. This is due to the fact that these restaurant might be serving buffets as their major...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24897959184 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92016214255 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0707953384 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166124437696 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593914632475 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447540769601 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113186397157 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031218164848 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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