Everyone has the human rights of freedom,equality, living and loving. However, love at college has been a controversial topic.To the best of my knowledge, It is a good idea to fall in love in college. Love can take advantage such as: academically, psychologically, so on . And this essay will discuss the reasons for myview as follows.
To begin with , for students with the right awareness and education, with a clear orientation, the love of school age will be a lever to motivate each other to progress in learning. Because at that age, YOU are afraid of being compared with YOUR lover. Therefore, YOU will try to learn to be at least equal to the person YOU love in study and later in life. Most of all, college love is the catalyst that fosters mature feelings and more mature thinking. It can be a powerful motivating force.for both of them to progress together, helping each other in learning and in life, which can then be the foundation for building a long-term and strong relationship. YOU will experience the purest, most sincere happiness.
On top of that , love help people improve their psyche. It is one of the ways to develop YOURSELF and help YOU to improve YOURSELF psychologically. It is the beautiful first emotion of each person and is also an inevitable emotion that follows human physiological laws when it comes to a certain stage of development. Love between men and women will help people become more selfless, understanding and empathetic. The forgiveness of the other person makes us think and raise our emotions. When two people are happy, emotions will overflow and it is a psychological impulse in each person. We all want to be cared for, shared, and love can be a panacea.
To sum up, falling in love in college gives us great emotions but at that age, love isn't everything. A coin has two sides, so does love. It gives us many things but can also take away a lot. Love is the driving force but not all. We should know how to balance everything in life
Everyone has the human rights of freedom,equality, living and loving. However, love at college has been a controversial topic.To the best of my knowledge, It is a good idea to fall in love in college. Love can take advantage such as: academically, psychologically, so on . And this essay will discuss the reasons for myview as follows.
To begin with , for students with the right awareness and education, with a clear orientation, the love of school age will be a lever to motivate each other to progress in learning. Because at that age, YOU are afraid of being compared with YOUR lover. Therefore, YOU will try to learn to be at least equal to the person YOU love in study and later in life. Most of all, college love is the catalyst that fosters mature feelings and more mature thinking. It can be a powerful motivating force.for both of them to progress together, helping each other in learning and in life, which can then be the foundation for building a long-term and strong relationship. YOU will experience the purest, most sincere happiness.
On top of that , love help people improve their psyche. It is one of the ways to develop YOURSELF and help YOU to improve YOURSELF psychologically. It is the beautiful first emotion of each person and is also an inevitable emotion that follows human physiological laws when it comes to a certain stage of development. Love between men and women will help people become more selfless, understanding and empathetic. The forgiveness of the other person makes us think and raise our emotions. When two people are happy, emotions will overflow and it is a psychological impulse in each person. We all want to be cared for, shared, and love can be a panacea.
To sum up, falling in love in college gives us great emotions but at that age, love isn't everything. A coin has two sides, so does love. It gives us many things but can also take away a lot. Love is the driving force but not all. We should know how to balance everything in life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, at least, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69714285714 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82510553079 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548571428571 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5158760797 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7272727273 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384445783078 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112934022484 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128437131941 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282640243512 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185167163529 0.056905535591 325% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.