Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that adopting a vegetarian diet could be greatly beneficial in terms of avoiding serious health problems that a meat diet can cause. I partly agree with this view, however, people could otherwise choose to take less meat and adding more vegetables to their diet.
On the one hand, a vegetarian diet can have a positive impact on people’s health. People who choose to completely abstain from meat are known for having a greater life expectancy than those choosing not to. This differences in longevity between vegetarian and meat-eaters could be explained by the very nature of animal fats against vegetable fats. Particularly, fats derived from animals is more likely than that from plants and fruits to cause arteriosclerosis which mainly contribute to premature old age and ensuing medical problems of such disease. Moreover, an excessive intake of meat, especially of high-fat meat, could greatly enhance the levels of stress, and even worse, make people more susceptible to depression.
However, conversion into vegetarianism is unnecessary if people could properly alter their diets. Increasing the proportion of vegetables in one’s diet while at the same time cutting down on the amount of meat is a viable alternative to a non-meat diet. By doing this, people are able to enjoy the advantage and enjoyment of a meat diet while helping them less liable to those medical problems associated with consuming red meat. On the other side, people having been greatly accustomed to taking meat over a long period is the reason why a complete change to a non-meat diet could be arduous and challenging to some.
In conclusion, vegetarianism could greatly benefit people's health. However, a scientifically balanced diet which still allows people to eat meat could be preferable to those who cannot give up meat altogether.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86828770084 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7507587252 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238270654153 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995503042067 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690387533205 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170271690266 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521174543952 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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