Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Plants and animals have been extinct from last few decades due to many issues.However, a fair amount of people believe,excessive attention and numerous resources are given in the protection of wild species would be helpful for its growth.The idea does seems modern and I completely accord with this viewpoint.
To embark on,providing several resources and observation would be a positive development which would undoubtedly effect the society as this trend may reduce the chance of extinction and give them a new way of live long.Moreover,Take caring of animals can also help to re-production process of them which eventually create a send of self actualization for upcoming generation.In additon,Government must need to impose some laws and implement in the favour of animals and birds,They should need to provide proper habitat and food sources which would help them to extend the numbers and population. One the top of it,birds and animals are the creation of nature,these are not our property it is heritage and we should preserve it for the next generation
On the other hand,this statement have some drawbacks which are highly criticized.For implementing such laws,Government need hefty sum of money, and people to organise and support these policies.Hence, this can lead a detrimental impact on the nations economy.Besides.Making several places for the resources and health care would also occupy large area of land and employment which really create an atmosphere of burden on the government.
After contemplating the subjected matter,I can conclude my vision that more attachment and more awareness may offer the chance of hazardous effect but in sharp contrast, it is really convenient and relaxing approach for the wild species in the foreseeable future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, may, moreover, really, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42753623188 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40783935069 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.888582007 49.4020404114 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 374.5 106.682146367 351% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.0 20.7667163134 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144414559792 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880000110517 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670201115102 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872053023911 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669905593857 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.6 13.0946893788 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.4 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.04 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.