Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Diet of an inhabitant is an important concern of today’s modern world. It is a general consideration that people should omit an animal food from their use. Besides that, encouragement towards vegetables is at its peak nowadays. As far as, my opinion is concerned I will strongly disagree with the hypothesis and the reason behind the captioned statement is discussed in the following paragraph.
To begin with, the benefits of a balanced diet cannot be ignored while talking about a healthy life. By excluding meat from our daily intake, we actually make our self-vulnerable for a variable disease. To write an example, Vitamin b12 which is the pivotal vitamin for the human being can be gained in the diet by taking red meat as it is the main source of it. As a matter of fact, its deficiency and unpaired defense system of a body with an ultimate result of poor health. In other words, the proportion of daily intake of animal protein facilitates people’s good health.
Moreover, maintenance of ecosystem is an unavoidable responsibility of living beings. By virtue of avoiding animal product in diet, their population in society will increase which eventually alter the ecosystem of earth. For instance, it is an observation of general survey conducted in India, cows are in the highest population among all domestic animals as the people in the Hindu religion avoid slaughtering of them. Besides that, they protect cow from cutting as they have their religious affection with them. One can say that the utilization of every source of food can maintain harmony in the environment.
I pen down by writing that, the human being should be encouraged to have a balanced diet with all range of food including meat, vegetables. Furthermore, by virtue of this dietary habits, people not only ensure a healthy life but also the blissful environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, talking about, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05844155844 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9109890607 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587662337662 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5190164982 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105536265434 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325258981279 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340641949852 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685426261072 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248380512913 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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