Nowadays, people are more concerned about their diet. Every would like a safe and healthy diet. Opinions are divided as to whether or not we should get rid of meat in everyday menu. Personally, I do not subscribe to the theory that all people should follow a meat-free diet, while I cannot deny its benefits.
For a number of reasons, it is unwise not to eat dishes made from meat. Healthy food must be balanced with necessary nutrients. Vegetables contain only a few nutrients. Although the human body can absorb a certain amount of protein from vegetables like beans and potatoes, certain proteins are found only in meat. Nutrients are less abundant in plants than in animals. Not all of us might like to be vegans because it requires a great amount of time to cook vegetarian food due to the complicated nature of the recipes. So, people choose to eat at restaurants that serve meat-free foods. But only the rich can afford this.
Vegetarianism is not without merits. Vegetable nutrients digest much easier than meat nutrients, especially proteins. Patients with kidney diseases are often medically advised to follow vegetarian diet to avoid excess intake of proteins. The higher the level of protein in diet, the greater the risk kidney patients may face.
It is, therefore, desirable to have a balanced diet consisting of both vegetable and meat in appropriate proportion, perhaps, as recommended by a dietitian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
... and healthy diet. Opinions are divided as to whether or not we should get rid of meat in everyday m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, therefore, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01687763713 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69999996703 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.36923012 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9411764706 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219834175426 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593526823234 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427750633278 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122707742523 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459924216191 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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