The given charts illustrate the feature of populations in two distinct nations in terms of the age group in the year 1984.
It is clear that the state of the aging population was happening in France in the surveyed year. Meanwhile, the image for India was much more promising because of its young population.
In France, people at working age, ranging from 20 to 65, occupied the most compared to other age categories, with around 3.5 % for women and approximately 4 % for men. This figure was also seen when considering under 20 age group, divided almost equally for 2 genders.
A more optimistic figure for India, the number of people for the above bracket registered gradually smaller proportion of the total population. In detail, nearly 15 % of the total was at the age of 0 to 5, and about 10% and 2% are the percentages for people aged 20 to 25 and aged over 70, respectively.
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole Do you agree or disagree 89
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7166899448 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6716727413 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237691721597 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113468930425 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071039232423 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151600399151 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518661458988 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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