Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people choose to become vegetarians since a vegetarian diet is believed to be better for the human body. Although I agree that eating only plant foods provideds us with a healthier diet, I still don’t agree that we should all be vegetarians.
The vegetarian foods have been known for long to protect the body from different diseases like the cancer, chronic fatigue, cholesterol problems and diabetes. These foods are low in the amount of the unsaturated fats and are therefore very healthy to eat.
There are many researchs saying that Human is able to live healthily by only eating plant-based diet. Actually, the meat is no need for our bodies although the body required 4 main nutrients including Carbohydrates, Protein, Fat, Vintamines and minerals for having good health. Because these nutrients can also come from vegetables, fruits, nuts, seeds and whole grains.
However, I don’t believe vegetarians should apply for everyone. Firstly, if we eat morderate meat servings, we will still have a good health. A research from Doctor Hiromi Shinya recommend our meals rate can contain 10-15% meat and the remaining is from plants is also good for our health. Furthermore, meats are tasty, we can made a lot of delicous meals from meat, even most of traditional foods contain meats and wherever you go, you can enjoy the numbers of special dishes without thinking it contains meats or not.
In conclusion, while I agree that becoming vegetarian can help people have a good health, I strongly believe it is not an option that everyone should take.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07722007722 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65511890234 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8776113446 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.583333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258787252929 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925596184811 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466116261273 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145366749574 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430541833033 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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