Everyone should become vegetarian because they don't need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree
It is debatable issue that all ought to eat vegetables and not met to stay healthy. This essay disagrees with that notion completely because of the benefits non vegetarian food brings to people.
To embark on, there are some cons of non-vegetarian food like brutally killing of innocent animals to get this kind of food, owing to this the number of animals starts plunging which disturbs the food chain. According to a survey due to increasing demand of meat some species like deer starts disappearing.
On the flip side, meat is the only eatable that fulfill the basic nutritional needs within less money. As most of non-vegetarian food are easily available and not that much costly. Hence, everyone without spending much can eat balanced diet. For example, one kilogram chicken costs rs. 100 where same amount of pulses cost rs. 120 to 150.
Apart from this, by eating this kind of food one has less chances to get dreaded diseases like cancer, obesity and heart diseases. As non-veg food has low-fat and rich fibre. So one can enjoy eating without getting obese. Moreover, cellulose present in vegetables takes much time to digest as compared to meat. That's why large intestine is always longer in herbivores as in carnivores. Hence, one can stay fit and healthy by eating meat.
In conclusion, only vegetarian food can't fulfill all the required nutritional needs. Hence, everyone have to eat meat to stay healthy, moreover it is cheaper than vegetables
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99591836735 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53451312248 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616326530612 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5088226137 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16657685312 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514862876224 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523661366978 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991595983224 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382728972764 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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