Everyone should vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree.
Now people has become aware about healthy diet which includes every protein, carbohydrates, minerals etcetera. It is often suggested by some people that everyone must be vegetarian as chicken and meat is no longer to maintain health. While I accept that vegetarian food could bring a healthy lifestyle, I also believe that we can not deny the role of meat in better health.
On the one hand, for many reasons people suggest to become vegetarian to people. Firstly, some people prefer to eat fresh and different kinds of fruits and vegetables which provide various kinds of minerals and vitamins which are required for keeping body healthy. Therefore, people includes only these items in their daily diet as vegetarians suffer from less illness such as heart diseases, diabetes and other ailments. Secondly, there are some vegetables which includes some minerals equal to meat, they never tend towards chicken to include in daily diet such as raw spinach provide large source of vitamins as A, E etcetera. Moreover, scientist discovered that vegetarian are more healthy people and seldom prone to diseases.
On the other hand, according to my perspective we can not completely remove meat from our daily diet. First of all, there must be balance in out intake as it should incluse fruits and vegetables as well as fish and meat. Therefore, body can obtain all essential vitamins for remaining healthy. It is discovered by scientists that several types of proteins, vitamins and minerals can be obtained from fish and meat, which can not be got from vegetables and fruits. Moreover, lack of these vitamins which we obtain from, cause bone fraction. Also, in order to complete this inadequate intake of minerals, most vegetarians are forced to take substitutes of deficit proteins so that they can take those vitamins which only we can get from meat and fishes.
To conclude, although some people suggest that people should become pure vegetarians for keeping themselves healthy yet I believe that there is nutritional value we can get from meat and chicken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56463827661 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8304744086 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.266666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146530863774 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058127686675 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328681630411 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10646529765 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268603251387 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.