Ex: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discussing about how to help poorer countries from rich countries. Some people consider that the rich countries should offer with poor countries in different aspects rather than only supporting their financial. In my opinion, I totally agree with this ideal.
Why the rich countries should support poorer countries in other different fields? Although giving money from those countries can help for the financial of poorer countries, however, people who live in the poor countries depends on the financial of rich countries so that it is not good for their help. Instead of the government in rich countries should invest in human or maybe technologies. For example, providing into their education system by help equipment, build more schools that improve cognitive abilities, helping them learn diversity and broaden their horizon especially children. Besides, for economic of modernization and industrialization invest into technology which is one of the best solutions in various fields. Firstly, the agriculture which creating food and drinks from cultivation, owning helping people can self-sufficient for their life. Secondly, providing into the industry that one of the keys by the ways offer more tools, software which improving product manufacturing capacity, in other words, unemployment will have more good opportunity to earn money for themselves. Thanks to, it helps the number of unemployment decrease instead of the rate both of economy and living standards increase gradually more.
In conclusion, I think that the rich countries have many aspects to support the poor countries that meaning the poor counties always have a more positive outlook for their life.
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- A recent newspaper article report that a 14 year old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison do you think this is right Or the young criminals should be sent to jail 82
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- More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past Why Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 61
- Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believed that all companies should have the right to advertise What is your opinion 65
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, by the way, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.578125 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98775781772 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6799117737 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321220620651 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133723748213 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121599679153 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23688796848 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559554072876 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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