EXPAIN SOME OF THE WAYS IN WHICH HUMANS ARE DAMAGING THE ENVIRONEMNT. WHAT CAN GOVERNMENT DO TO ADDRESS THIS PROBLEM?
In this day and age, environmental PROBLEMS seem to be a widespread concern.In this essay, I will outline several reasons for this phenomenon, and put forward some feasible measures to address this issues.
The first cause with regard to environmental problems isncreasing air pollution.To be more specific, people have a tendency private vehicles instead of using public transportations because of their convenience and comfort.BY THAT I MEAN there are more and more vehicles which release gas emissions into the air WHICH WILL it will lead to climate change and global warming THAT are detrimental for the Earth.Secondly, the booming population is putting pressure on water resources. It is undeniable that HUMAN’S ACTS OF
LITERRING A LARGE AMOUNT OF NON-BIODEGRADABLE PACKAGING DISCARDING waste into the rivers, lakes, AND oceans CAN LEAD TO NEGATIVE CONSEQUENCES IN WHICH DESTROY THE MARINE SYSTEMS AND BALANCED ECOSYSTEM.
On the BASIS of aforesaid reasons, comprehensive practical solutions have been IDENTIFIED. Initially, governments should introduce laws to limit emissions from private vehicles by posing “green taxes” on drivers. FUTHERMORE, the authorities should invest SIGNIFICANT amount of money TO DEVELOP facilities and infrastructures OF PUBLIC TRANSPORTS. CONSEQUENTLY, PEOPLE WOULD BE LESS INTERESTED IN USING THEIR PRIVATE VEHICLES, THEREBY REDUCING AIR POLLUTION.
The second REMEDY could be that people SHOULD BE MORE CONCERNED ABOUT raise awareness in protecting the stream of water. For example,USING/CHOOSING less-packaging PRODUCTS and recycle as much as possible. Similarly, individuals should try to KEEP THE SURROUNDINGS GREEN AND CLEAN.
In conclusion, I firmly believe THAT both governments and individuals are responsible for environmental problems, AND these measures must be adopted to tackle the worrisome situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, i mean, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92222222222 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42240058859 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.91140087 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.363636364 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128639037185 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362095288373 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554514146402 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616362700297 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611059333038 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.91 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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