With MAJOR CITIES CONTINUE GROWING, ARE THERE ANY PROBLEMS TO YOUNG PEOPLE? HOW TO SOLVE THESE PROBLEMS?
As urbanization progressed rapidly, the issues of obstacles facing the youth in metropolitan areas have come into sharp focus. This is a multifaceted issue, and reaching a consensus on the effect on youngsters and solution of this trend is challenging. According to my knowledge, I will explain its potential effects and suggest effective remedies in this essay below.
Regarding potential influences, this ascending trend of urbanization is likely to cause snowball effects. It is true that in this day and age, there are more cosmopolitan areas established around the world. Hence, it is anticipated that urbanization may lead to the high cost of living such as housing, water, food and other necessities, mainly due to overpopulation Anecdotal evidence shows that in China and the US where the youth are afraid of unemployment and may struggle to find affordable housing , which makes sense for reducing their chances to access higher education and job opportunities. Besides, another consequence that should be taken into account is air pollution. It is widely acknowledged that not only youngsters but also the elderly suffer from pollution, which is directly affected by releasing emissions from factories. For instance, in Vietnam, Sai Gon and Ha Noi are the melting-pot areas, therefore, the amount of emissions which is discarded into the air is alarmingly high. As a result, it will cause some diseases related to air pollution such as lung cancer or respiratory and so on.
To crack this hard nut, feasible measures should be adopted without any delay due to the fact that young people will be the next generation who develop the prospect of the country.The first approach is that governments should enhance the awareness of dwellers towards this problems by publicity and education to make them recognize the fact the potential negative impacts of urbanization on young people are significant as well as promoting alternative ways of living and working which makes them feel a sense of happiness and satisfaction.Meanwhile, some regulations should be issued to ensure that serve punishments could be imposed on potential offenders who engage activities that may harm young people. This can include measures to ban the operation of factories for those who emit the toxic waste into the atmosphere. If the government could enact laws and impose tough punishments, the problem could be reduced significantly.
In conclusion, as discussed above, the challenges facing young people in major cities due to urbanization are complex and require comprehensive solutions. I would tend to suggest some effective remedies including increasing awareness of negative impacts of major cities on youngsters as encouraging them to live and work more positively. In addition, the authorities also play an integral part in reducing problems by imposing regulations and implementing their responsibility in supporting young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2477.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42013129103 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15870352268 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562363238512 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.257478778 49.4020404114 308% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.8125 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117084393335 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320867674845 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509210465288 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766702464301 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813417358991 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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