Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the
environment. What can governments do to address these problems?
What can individual people do?
Environmental problems have became a nerve-racking issue for not only the government throughout the world but also all humanity. this tendency is allegedly attributable to damaging activities of human. Luckily, there is some step to be taken by authority and each person to solve this hassle.
there is a variety of human actions which played havoc with the enviroment. First of all is the agriculture activities. it seems to be some evidences that in many countries, especially the impoverished one, tree are being cut down with the aim of construction materials or fuels. By way of illustration, many wood-related industrials such as paper or furniture are thrive on illegal wood cutting to meet their demand. Secondly, there is the exhaust fumes discharging from vehicles and burning garbages. The emissions entered the atmosphere are responsible for contaminating the air and puncturing the ozone layer. last but not least is the wastewater from household and factories. it reportedly contained several lethal substances that may polluting water resources located nearby
there is some solution should be taken to diminish the damage. Firstly, a law should be enforced to form a legal corridor. this will help in sentencing the act of polluting the environment and limiting the natural exploitation. In the second place, both government and each citizen can raise the awareness among population through education and media. <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">organising </span>and participating in the local campaign for the climate change or loss of endangered species habitat are good cases in point. Besides, each one needs to gather the knowledge about the environment on their own. Finally, using public transport instead of private vehicles is a good way to bringing down the emission and furthermore, it also tackled the problem of traffic congestion
To summarize, there are numerous damaging actions from humanity including agriculture activities, discharging the exhaust fumes or the poisoning water. Nevertheless, people can deal with this puzzle by raising public awareness, using public transportations or enforcing a law on environment
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63829787234 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38548887285 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613981762918 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4938511653 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.055555556 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12213961875 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313532223388 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342238713471 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757385793318 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02221704246 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.