Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can the government do to address this problem? What can individual people do?
It is a bitter truth that people play a gigantic role in affecting the environment. However, we have an ample time to take action towards the protection of the environment. In this essay, I will discuss various causes of this, and steps that the Government and individuals can take to overcome the issue.
There are three major factors: deforestation, industrialisation,and transportation behind the damage of the atmosphere. Firstly, human activity of deforestation is responsible for disturbing the rain cycle and as a consequence drought has become a common problem in many areas. Secondly, due to the industrialization era many factories release contaminated water and other carbon waste in the environment without filtration.To the end, rivers are polluted and soil fertility decreases rapidly. Last but not least, use of fossil fuel in vehicles emits hazardous gases such as carbon dioxide, sulphur dioxide, and monoxide in the atmosphere which leads to global warming and acid rain.
Although we have some time to overcome this issue.Let's begin with the government's role, administration should make law and legislation for industries to not release polluted air or water in the environment if they do, governments have to punish them and take enormous amounts of penalty. Apart from this, the ministry must organise camps to encourage people to use public transportation rather than private transport through doing cost cuts in them. Moreover, governments should control deforestation activity and motivate them to grow more trees.
On the other side, people have to curb using fossil fuels and refuse to use vehicles for short distances. What's more, every singular person should use biodegradable products at home. In addition, people must refuse the use of plastic bags which create more garbage on the streets, and making it a habit to use paper bags or cloth bags to overcome litter.
Agglomerating all the points demonstrated above it can be concluded that humans are responsible for damaging the environment and it will overcome if both the government and individual people support each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38253012048 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11520201545 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605421686747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8805431985 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.642857143 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24175109973 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675943891182 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618804503119 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122853439861 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05643320422 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.