Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet and television to what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no denying that due to vast number of inventions, internet and televisions have become an indispensable part of education.However, I believe that teachers play a vital role in the classroom.This essay will argue why tutors are entirely necessary to educate pupils.
Parents have a belief that their offspring should be taught by teachers who are experts either in their particular field or subjects.The reason why children get proper utterly knowledge about subject is that they learn go through professional teachers who not only have P.H.D in that field but also have substantial amount of experience.If teachers had not established the perfect base of education for students, they would not have cultivated the present level of intelligence.These few beautifully planned structure from faculties' lifelong experience are fully reliable for learners.
The other reason to prove my point is that traditional methods of teaching do not require high-end gadgets which are often overpriced.Moreover, they are utterly dependent on electricity as well as cost-fortune internet connection.They are modern tools nevertheless unreliable.Indeed, enormous information on internet and television is published by vulnerable facts and local writers. Consequently, numerous school-children struggle to find worthy information online. Overall, the internet and idiot-box are unnecessary, provide ill-information and highly critical for children and could confuse them.
This essay argued why toddlers learn far more from expert teachers than extraordinary other sources like internet and TV. In my opinion, educating children from teachers is an absolute imperative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9377593361 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52201751255 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680497925311 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.705104277 49.4020404114 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.428571429 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196063223899 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972168306473 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894870557659 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12702597775 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101715194988 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.76 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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