The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is an indispensable needs of today's world to discover new alternatives to fossil fuels. However, in this essay agree with the statement because, finding new resources may overcome the deficiency of coal, petrol, and gas . Enhancement of environmentally friendly, and versatile renewable fuels may diminish atmospheric pollution to some extent.
Declining natural resources has been a burgeoning problem in all around the world. Inflation of these fuels may changing the national economy and exchange rate to the core. Owing to the fact that, exploring innovative fuel products seems to be used in vehicles, factories and other purposes would be tackle the issues minimally. Developing alternative resources may flourish many countries financial status by excessive dependency to other fossil producing countries. For instance, generating renewable electric power is one of the best alternatives and most of the countries could be able to produce electricity by many ways. Furthermore, inability to achieve alternatives to fossil fuels may lead to the detrimental effects on forthcoming years by the deficiency of this natural resources.
Environmental pollution from the fossil by products has been a serious repercussion globally. Exploration of alternatives would minimize the air pollution and carbon dioxide emissions to the core. Most probably, many world wide issues would be solute by the usage of other resources instead of fossil fuels like global warming, climate changes and so on. For example, recent study report from UN explain that, the predominant factor of atmospheric pollution is the emission of huge amount of fossil by products. Moreover, other alternatives which is environmentally friendly, renewable versatile products usage is often helps to built a pollution free environment and sustainable living ambiance.
To sum up, it is true that, having an alternative to fossil fuels for the wellness of earth and to improvise national economical standards. Thereby, considering ways to develop ingenious alternatives would be an important debating matter of choice globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68888888889 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12904761103 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.646930923 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186202248934 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614275838986 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294819712785 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115276045177 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185554470525 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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