The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that finding feasible energy than fossil fuels is the principal concern of world market. This essay agrees that the development of wind and electric as a sustainable source of energy is the global priority at present moment. The essay will first discuss the fact that using such environment friendly energy helps to reduce the global warming and how balanced ecological atmosphere would minimize the economic crisis situation to the respective country.
It is clear that using electricity and wind power as a source of sustainable energy by the world would create less harmful situation to the environment. It allows the environment less polluted which might be arise from the various means of transportation and machinery items used with diesel and petrol. As a consequence of that people of the world do not have to face with the multiple health problems related to environment such as flue and cough. For instance, this is most evident in my county that government of Nepal is promoting electric vehicle by making subsides policy in annual tax payment to government.
On the other hand promoting such environmental friendly source of energy definitely reduce the cost of government used for transportation and power supply. There were once government of respective state invest huge amount of developmental budget for storing diesel, petrol and carocean for supplying necessary power to their citizen now they are independent with the sustainable energy produced from natural phenomenon, thereby, reducing the cost of power supply and employ such economy for overall development of the state and their citizen respectively. For example, the The Himalayan Times in March 2019 reported that 40 percent of economic crisis situation of developed countries are able to reduce by investing their economy to finding solar energy and developing hydropower as the sustainable source of energy.
In conclusion, the fact that by promoting more ecological friendly source of energy definitely help the citizen to have a healthier life and it further help the respective government to follow more sustainable source of power by minimizing the cost of national budget which is generally used for others fossil fuel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 570, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...heir citizen respectively. For example, the The Himalayan Times in March 2019 reported ...
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Line 9, column 570, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'The' is left.
Suggestion: the; The
...heir citizen respectively. For example, the The Himalayan Times in March 2019 reported ...
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Line 13, column 153, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...to have a healthier life and it further help the respective government to follow mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36827195467 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83390349097 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498583569405 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8640093355 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.272727273 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0909090909 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791491796004 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373360052218 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036832914023 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547479624412 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346129016886 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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