The line graph illustrates the amount spent by British parents on their children's sport from 2008 to 2014. Whereas the second graph illustrates participation in 3 different sports among those football was the most popular, whereas athletics and swimming show advancement in the last of the period.
Around 20 million pounds are spent in 2008 which kept on increasing reaching around 33 million pounds at the end of this period. It can be seen the parents spent more over this period.
However in Britain over the same period, it can be seen football was the most popular among the three where it remains steady throughout this period reaching nearly 8.5 million participants from 7.5 in the beginning. Whereas in athletics and swimming the participation was nearly 0.5 and 2.3 respectively in 2008 and swimming increases at a steady pace throughout this period and end up having 4 million participants. Athletics starts with the lowest participation in the beginning but shows a gradual increase during 2011 reaching around 2.5 million participation and end up having nearly 4.9 million participants at the end of the period. It can be seen the participation extremely increased at the end then at the start of the period.
The line graph illustrates the amount spent by British parents on their children's sport from 2008 to 2014. Whereas the second graph illustrates participation in 3 different sports among those football was the most popular, whereas athletics and swimming show advancement in the last of the period.
Around 20 million pounds are spent in 2008 which kept on increasing reaching around 33 million pounds at the end of this period. It can be seen the parents spent more over this period.
However in Britain over the same period, it can be seen football was the most popular among the three where it remains steady throughout this period reaching nearly 8.5 million participants from 7.5 in the beginning. Whereas in athletics and swimming the participation was nearly 0.5 and 2.3 respectively in 2008 and swimming increases at a steady pace throughout this period and end up having 4 million participants. Athletics starts with the lowest participation in the beginning but shows a gradual increase during 2011 reaching around 2.5 million participation and end up having nearly 4.9 million participants at the end of the period. It can be seen the participation extremely increased at the end then at the start of the period.
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children s sports between 2008 and 2014 The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period 67
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 56
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- Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help other To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this football' or 'those footballs'?
Suggestion: this football; those footballs
...rticipation in 3 different sports among those football was the most popular, whereas athletics...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e parents spent more over this period. However in Britain over the same period, it can...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...period. It can be seen the participation extremely increased at the end then at t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06435643564 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85507972691 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490099009901 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0227710295 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.875 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0644611336262 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394769145772 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212071282773 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482183452253 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0086743271559 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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