Families who send their children to private schools should not berequired to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be

required to pay taxes that support the state education system.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools

should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally,

I completely disagree with this view.

For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families

who pay for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the

correct amount of tax reduction for these families, and staff would be

required to manage this complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain

amount of tax for public services that we may not use. For example, most

people are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or fire brigade

at any time in their lives, but they would not expect a tax reduction for

this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their

children to private schools, we might have a situation where poorer

people pay higher taxes than the rich.

In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that

supports public schools. It is beneficial for all members of society to have

a high quality education system with equal opportunities for all young

people. This will result in a well-educated workforce, and in turn a more

productive and prosperous nation. Parents of children in private schools

may also see the advantages of this in their own lives. For example, a

company owner will need well qualified and competent staff, and a wellfunded education system can provide such employees.

In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be

made for people who choose private education.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Should
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Suggestion: Required
...or these families, and staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondl...
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...ocess. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may ...
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Suggestion: This
... would not expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were give...
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Suggestion: People
...e might have a situation where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich. In my...
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...py to pay our share of the money that supports public schools. It is beneficial for al...
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...ith equal opportunities for all young people. This will result in a well-educated wo...
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...ducated workforce, and in turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Parents of child...
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...arents of children in private schools may also see the advantages of this in thei...
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Suggestion: Made
...t any financial concessions should be made for people who choose private education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11610486891 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62543877911 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4910623734 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282487070222 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106985977458 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534668764799 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846689929893 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452938045043 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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