Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is sometimes argued that families of children who are taught by private schools should not need to support the state education system by paying taxes. In my opinion. I completely disagree with this statement.
There are many reasons why it would be wrong that families who pay for private schools should not need to pay taxes. Firstly, paying taxes backing the education system of a nation is obligatory to all citizens. Specifically, governments would not interfere with families sending their children to private schools or public schools. If families choose the private school, they will be able to have higher incomes because the tuition fee of private schools is almost more expensive than one of the state-funded schools. According to the laws, these families have their children learning in private schools would have to accept to pay taxes. Secondly, people usually pay a certain amount of taxes for public services that they rarely use in their life. For instance, most people hardly have an opportunity to call the police or the fire department, but people would not expect to reduce taxes for this.
Personally, all people would be willing to pay taxes to assist the state education system. It is beneficial for all members of society to have a quality education system with equal chances for all young people. For example, these taxes could help students who have a poor background to go to school. As a result, the more high-educated workers are, the more developed the country is.
In conclusion, I believe that parents of children who attend private schools should contribute to the education system of authorities by paying taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0989010989 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60086157654 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1366032486 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434661222924 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160161632781 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103558973758 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308319105519 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101892634135 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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