In the contemporary world, it is undoubted that fashion plays a vital role in affecting how people choose their clothes. The purpose of this essay is to discuss the main reason leading to this condition and then explain why I completely agree that it has more benefits outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, I believe that fashion has a positive impact on people’s choices of clothes. Firstly, the more developed the societies are, the higher demand of individuals to improve their own styles. They always want to keep up with the latest trends and look fashionable and stylish in front of their friends. This is because fashion conveys a lot about the personalities, tastes and lifestyle. To illustrate, if those who are smartly dressed, they can be self-confident and make a great first impression with others. Furthermore, paying for trendy clothes can satisfy a requirement for novelty for themselves, which has been proved to help individuals reduce stress and working pressure.
On the other hand, it can be seen that fashion still have some paybacks because of its adverse effects on juvenile minds. The primary reason is that teenagers waste much time on investing in trendy clothes and try to imitate fashionistas or celebrities. As a consequence, this will put financial repercussions on families that is not wealthy enough to adapt their children demands. For instance, children always want to be stylish as their friends and snobbish parents to buy them that stuffs at any cost. Another compelling reason is that nowadays the young tend to be judgmental about others' styles or appearance, and this can lead to a more materialistic environment and the nervosity and jealousy of each person.
In conclusion, fashion has both advantages and disadvantages on the development of citizens’ choices in clothes. However, I personally advocate that its negative sides outweigh the other and each individual should not keep up and imitate everything they see on the social network or in public.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15596330275 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93629901117 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581039755352 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.865748019 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165316102186 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052159340575 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431267266353 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992524357351 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384417843906 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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