Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.
In a modern lifestyle fast food is becoming more and more popular all over the world. that is why it is considered a part of life in many places. it can be said that fast food has become a popular meal for many people. many people these days have busy lives and don't have enough time to make meals at home, so they eat at fast food places. Some people think this has bad effects on lifestyle and diet. In my opinion, I strongly agree that there are far more bad effects that can be identified from eating these fast foods due to several reasons.
Firstly, fast food usually consists of a high level of sodium and fat which leads to certain health issues like heart disease, diabetes, blood pressure and so on. sugar, salt, spice, and oil are all rich in sugar, salt, spice, and oil in fast food. this excess amount develops in the human body after turning to fat in the liver, and as a result, the human body's function begins to decline, resulting in serious diseases.
Secondly, people think that fast food is a suitable and rapid way to feed the stomach in extremely busy daily life.Furthermore, these foods are less expensive than other foods and are easily available at any time of day. Additionally, there are many different types of junk food to choose from, and the taste is usually rather nice. so, eating a lot of fast food leads to a lack of nutrients in the body.
In conclusion, eating fast food outside is not a good habit for a healthy life. In my opinion, you cannot be forbidden from selling this, but people should be aware of the negative consequences because it has an indirect impact on human existence in terms of health, money, and social status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53947368421 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32823175149 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1332556611 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332991291221 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125885477443 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112238466275 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18140457676 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103857826946 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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