It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city
some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. However, other people think that a big city gives more opportunities and it is good for the long run. Personally, I belive that it is better for children to grow up in a city that provides various advantages for a variety reasons.
The first reason I think a city is a better place is cities provides better opportunities for nurturing and studying. living in a city provides them with a more comfortable lifestyle as well as a positive future. Since, the best teachers, the biggest schools and high schools, more skillful tutors, will give education with more quality. In large cities, teachers with stronger skill and education experience are more plentiful, resulting in superior educational quality for children. growing up in a big city prepares children to adjust to the fast pace of modern life.
Another reason, children have some advantages when they live in a big city. they have more options, for example, when it comes to what they want to study. they can go to a ballet school, an art school, or a gymnastics school. it is beneficial to them in the long run. they will be better prepared for life with greater chances to find work and achieve. Furthermore, a city usually includes a lot of entertainment options, such as movie theater or video games. On the other hand, children to grow up in a big city is that it offers better living conditions and services such as medical, dental and so on.
The third reason is that big cities have colleges and universities with many departments that provide a good education to its people, which is why many people prefer the city because of the variety of institutions that cover a range of subjects and have teachers with excellent qualification and knowledge.
To sum up, I think that a city is the best place for children to grow up and have the best growing conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, third, well, for example, i think, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73156342183 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71342820659 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466076696165 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1196873249 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3529411765 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.518386510832 0.244688304435 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179814091088 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176613480707 0.0667982634062 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323139267289 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18297369982 0.056905535591 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.